Magaroni Trade

this is my half of a canon trade with she requested swiftpaw and the dog pack.

conceptually this started out a lot different and gory, but I like the direction I decided to take it in the end.

a little narration: Swiftpaw reassured Brightpaw as they neared where the dog pack had been sighted. "We'll just make enough noise to get em' scared, and then go after the stragglers." he told her with confidence, how bad could a few little dogs be? The mutts he saw the twolegs walk were hardly any match for a few warriors, and shook so much he was sure they'd be frightened quickly.

There was the cave now, darkened in the setting sun. Swiftpaw lowered his voice into a threatening growl. "ALLRIGHT YOU DOGS! WE'VE GOT YOU SURROUNDED! GIVE UP WHILE YOU STILL--"

The ground shook as a massive dog pounded from the depths of the cave, snarling at this noisy nuisance.

"--still can." Swiftpaw trailed off as the shadow of the huge dog fell over him, cutting off the suns rays and drowing him with cold. and fear.

He heard brightpaw gasp behind him, and the weight of his situation became apparent. "oh starclan, no." he whispered. the dog reared and barked "Pack Pack! KILL KILL!"